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Post by lightningstar on Aug 14, 2010 7:15:06 GMT -5
the title says it all.
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Post by Clearstar on Aug 14, 2010 7:56:39 GMT -5
Well, Try to learn new vocabulary words, it makes you look smarter and your posts longer. and you have to start by who your characters are, what hey look like and what exactly they are doing. Now try to write an opening paragraph.
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Post by lightningstar on Aug 14, 2010 15:02:49 GMT -5
ummmmm ok....
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Post by Clearstar on Aug 14, 2010 20:50:06 GMT -5
No I mean try writing one here and I'll help you out with it.
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Post by lightningstar on Aug 15, 2010 6:59:11 GMT -5
ok.
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Post by Clearstar on Aug 15, 2010 7:39:57 GMT -5
Please write one here.
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Post by lightningstar on Aug 15, 2010 16:30:24 GMT -5
ok.......
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 16, 2010 8:37:47 GMT -5
my cat turned my computer screen off before i made this post and now he's rubbing up against my legs! well, he was. now he's walking around the office and looking at the mess of toys and stuff. and my collection of warriors books!
and so yeah. it's good to put lots of detail in, but not too much or else some of it might become ununderstandible.
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Post by Clearstar on Aug 16, 2010 8:38:45 GMT -5
Maybe he thinks he can become as warrior himself!
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 16, 2010 8:45:26 GMT -5
hahahahaha! maybe clearstar.
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Post by Clearstar on Aug 16, 2010 8:47:18 GMT -5
I made a funny. I don't know I was up until at least 11:30 and I'm exausted. Grr
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 16, 2010 10:41:50 GMT -5
yeah. he climbed to the top of our fake tree today! it was cute!
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Post by lightningstar on Aug 16, 2010 16:04:45 GMT -5
really?!?
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Post by Clearstar on Aug 16, 2010 16:06:03 GMT -5
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW When he gets older you'll have to keep him inside. He might climb a real tree, and never come down.
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Post by lightningstar on Aug 16, 2010 16:08:32 GMT -5
hahahaha i agree one of my cats use to be a outdoor cat but now shes a indoor cat.
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