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Post by Clearstar on Aug 16, 2010 16:11:29 GMT -5
LOL
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Post by lightningstar on Aug 16, 2010 17:06:46 GMT -5
hahahaha
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 17, 2010 9:23:14 GMT -5
i got my cat on a farm.
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Post by Clearstar on Aug 17, 2010 10:06:42 GMT -5
I got my puppy, from a big truck that had come all the way from Arkansas to connecticut. She was so tiny and her paws were huge! We had to carry her to the car since she kept tripping over them sop often. When I get home I might be able to upload a picture of ehr from then to now. She still thinks she's a lap dog but as small as she is she weighs mroe than I do. I love my chubby puppy.
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Post by lightningstar on Aug 17, 2010 11:57:09 GMT -5
me tooooo
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Post by sapheeria on Sept 1, 2010 20:53:30 GMT -5
Lightningstar,describe the surroundings and the colors describe what the charracter is feeling,etc. Here's a boring,short sentence. "Bob waved at Kathy and She smiled." See,it doesn't describe anything but the main subjects....Bob and Kathy. Here's what I would do to the sentence.... Bob waved excitedly towards his friend Kathy,his long arms flailing in the air.The cafateria smelled of roast beef and potatoes.The surrounding kids talked quietly to their friends as Bob waved.Kathy smiled flirtly back at Bob and walked over."Hi! How are you?" See the diference?See how much better the sentence is? And another tip,use correct puncuation and grammar!!!!! <3 Frosty
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Post by lightningstar on Sept 2, 2010 5:50:52 GMT -5
thank you.
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Post by Clearstar on Sept 2, 2010 5:52:18 GMT -5
ooc- woooooooooo! Frost is awsome!
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Post by stormflight on Sept 2, 2010 5:52:18 GMT -5
XD
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Post by lightningstar on Sept 2, 2010 5:53:46 GMT -5
yes she is ;D
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Post by sapheeria on Sept 2, 2010 19:06:50 GMT -5
Ooookkaaay.......*Awkward* How am I that awsome?
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Post by lightningstar on Sept 2, 2010 19:35:03 GMT -5
lol you just are.
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Post by stormflight on Sept 8, 2010 20:08:06 GMT -5
Yay Froststar <3 Joined the Elite group of awsome people like me!!!! YAY!!!
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Post by lightningstar on Sept 9, 2010 16:00:45 GMT -5
and me
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Post by stormflight on Sept 9, 2010 18:13:11 GMT -5
Heh heh... weeeeeeelllll don't get ahead of yourself Lightningstar...
XD Jk :3
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